Thursday, March 31, 2016

Keeping it Real


In a New Post share your thoughtful answers to 4-5 of the Dan In Real Life questions.  Shoot for about 500 words.  Include an image.


Please be sure you're caught up on all blog posts so far this quarter so we can move on to a new topic next week...a pinyin poetry project and a visit from MSU Chinese students!

Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Culture Swap: What Would You Do?


Write a letter of 300-400 words to your Chinese pen pals commenting on some aspect of the What Would You Do? and Wife Swap clips we watched in class.  Share connections you can make to your own life, how you think these clips accurately portray us, what they might leave out, your own experiences in situations like these, etc.  Think about what you'd like the Chinese to know about us as Americans and/or you as an individual.  What are we proud of when it comes to our way of life?  What would we like to do better or see in our future?  

Ask some good questions about what the Chinese students thought of the clips, what those shows might look like if they were filmed in China, something else you'd like to know...

Share your letter in a New Post on your blog, please, and send your letter to your pen pals.  You can send the same letter to both of your pen pals.

Kevin sent me a copy of his lesson he used with the Wife Swap episode.  Here's some of what he said about how he introduced the show and some of the issues/concepts they're working on...


Hey! I've attached my lesson for Wife Swap for what it's worth. Maybe your students would be interested to look at what (I make) the students do in class. We covered fifteen phrasal verbs for this show because phrasal verbs are insanely difficult for non-native speakers, and we use them all the time. Take is used, for example, in dozens of phrasal verbs in the show, and even the single phrasal verb "take off" has several meanings. So these are really important for them. 

I used the second slide to elicit the name of the show and introduce a game. They then look at the last fifteen slides and have to look at the two pictures and come up with the phrasal verbs that correspond to the pictures and write the verb phrase on the blanks on the worksheet. After the phrasal verbs are all elicited, we work on meaning and pronunciation. This is tricky, too, because for a phrase like "count on," most Americans drop the /t/ in count, so it winds up sounding like cow-non; using the /t/ sounds unnatural and throws off sentence rhythm. 

When we watched the show, we focused on phrasal verbs in the first ten minutes of the show and then sentence stress in questions in the last ten minutes. I also paused quite a bit to talk about gender roles/politics. One of the husbands is a self-proclaimed redneck and he says things to his "new" wife like "I'm thirsty." My students don't understand the implicit meaning (go get me a beer).

Finally we watch the show and they answer the discussion questions. The circle with four lines at the bottom is for a freer speaking activity. I asked them to put their name in the circle, and write four facts about themselves or interests using only one or two words like "Chinese" or "pizza" or "dog." Then they mingle and ask each other questions, ideally mimicking the stress patterns we just covered.

This is long-winded.. Sorry! Your students are awesome, and my students are loving this. Thank you and be in touch soon!

Kevin

"Reely" Good Quotes

Dumb and Dumber

Create a New Post featuring 4-5 of your favorite MOVIE QUOTES.  These could be funny, sad, smart...whatever stands out to you.  You can type these or use an image featuring the quote.  Make sure you indicate the film the quote is from, and the character if you'd like.

When a Man Loves a Woman






"Reel" Life

Do a  New Post answering the following questions (in at least 400 words) about your preferences in movies.
  • Tell us about your favorite movie and why you like it.
  • Tell us about the kinds of movies you don't care for usually.
  • Tell us about how often and where you usually watch movies.
  • Tell us about what you need for movie viewing (environment, food, company, etc.)
  • Tell us about what this survey says about you.
  • If my life story was made into a movie...(who would play you, what would be 3-4 main plot points/events, happy or sad ending, etc.)
Include images in this post also. Thanks!

When you're finished, leave a quick comment on the movie post and/or movie quotes post of at least 5 of your classmates.

Wednesday, March 23, 2016

Inspired by Hopper

Nighthawks
Hours of Darkness


Freight Car at Truro

Soir Bleu


Choose one of the 4 paintings (above) by American artist Edward Hopper we studied in class this week (his painting "Nighthawks" is referenced in the insurance commercial we watched) and write a piece of at least 300 words inspired by it.  You might do a short fiction piece or a personal narrative or maybe even a long narrative poem.  You can refer to your lists of sensory details and other thoughts in your journal entry completed in class for ideas.  Please create a New Post on your blog  by the end of class today with your writing and include the painting, too.  Thanks!

Windows


In a New Post on your blog, please share the Window Poem you created in class on Tuesday.  Add an image.  Thanks!

Monday, March 21, 2016

Replies to China

We need to take a quick break from our study of ART as inspiration for writing at the start of this week to respond to the letters and writing our Chinese friends sent us.  You should have received letters back from 2 of Kevin's students and also an object-inspired piece (or some other writing?) from them.  Please do the following today:

1:  Reply to the letters the way you would any other email or correspondence.  Answer the questions you were asked, ask questions of your own (about something the student has said or mentioned or maybe something else you're wondering about in terms of school, culture, family, interests, China, etc.), update them on what you've been up to since last writing.  You want to keep the conversation going so give the students something to respond to and maybe even ask that they write back when they can.




2:  Respond to the writing piece the students sent you in a positive, helpful way.  See Kevin's thoughts below on the kind of feedback that might help.  You don't need to "FIX" the paper, even if the student asked you to. What I would suggest is this:

  • a greeting thanking the person for sharing and naming something you enjoyed about the piece
  • 3-5 questions that could aid in revision/expansion of the piece
  • close by naming something else you thought really worked and a statement of encouragement

If you're comfortable with it, I'd love for you to copy/paste the letters with your replies on a New Post on your own blog and copy/paste the students' writing pieces with your feedback to separate New Post on your blog.  

Please reply to both letters and both pieces by the end of class today and either post your work on your own blog or show me that you have done.  If you can't finish in class, please do so on your own.  If you have time, check in on your classmates' blogs and see what thei Chinese students sent them.  Thanks so much!

A message from Kevin I got today:

Hello Hayley and class:

My students are loving this project and working hard--hope their writing shows it at least a little! I believe the last round of emails ought to come in in the next day or two. It'd be awesome if your students could ask my students questions that might indicate areas of confusing, vague, or incorrect language in their writing. Also my students would be thrilled to field any questions your students might have about China, college life, etc.

I know at least a few of my students directly asked yours to "correct" and "fix" their English, and I know that probably puts your students in a really awkward spot. So if my students are using gibberish 
maybe asking questions is a less direct approach. I talked to my students about error correction and tried to convey the idea that correction isn't the nature of the exchange. 

I was also thinking it might be really fun for all parties if students exchanged ideas about TV shows. This week we're going to watch three segments from What Would You Do? and my students will be fascinated but also flummoxed. They aren't aware about common American attitudes towards gay adoption, racism, etc., and the shows do a great job bringing those attitudes to light. Anyway, is it possible to exchange ideas if both our classes watch the same episodes? I found them on YouTube when I was home and included the titles in the attached document. Are you allowed to access that site while at school?

Please let me know what you think, and honestly, if your students respond to my students by asking questions or sharing thoughts about my students' ideas, that'd be great. Thanks!

Kevin  

Friday, March 18, 2016

Poems for Pieces by Artist Profiled


In a New Post on your blog please choose 2 pieces by the artist you profiled Thursday and write a narrative poem of at least 10 lines for each. 

A narrative poem is one that tells a story.  It doesn't need to rhyme.  You could tell a made-up story inspired by the painting, you could tell a story from your own life the piece makes you think of, you could make up a story about the subjects in the painting...You could connect your two 10-line poems or let them stand on their own. Try to include vivid, sensory details and rich, interesting word choices.  You might even try to include a poetic device (like alliteration, simile, repetition, etc.) if you're comfortable doing so.  Please include an image of the piece of art you are writing about in your post.  Give the post a creative title.

Thursday, March 17, 2016

Artist Profile

Grumpy Cat works in oils

Please profile the artist you chose to study in a New Post on your blog.  Please all include the information from your brochure, but instead of listing it, write the information more like a life story in paragraphs.  Include an image and/or self-portrait of the artist as well as 2-3 images of the artist's most famous works.  Title Your Post Artist Profile: ______ (name of artist).  Thanks!

Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Art/Therapy

I hope you enjoyed the process of coloring the printed mandala designs in class today. Mandalas are important to a variety of cultures, faiths and schools of thought...

You can create some interesting mandalas at this site.  If you click on the asterisks, there is more information about the different elements.

Leave a brief but thoughtful COMMENT (100-200 words) on this post answering one or more of these questions:
  • How or why do you think art could be used as therapy?
  • Can you think of other pieces of or types of art that are connected to certain faiths, disciplines or movements?
  • What role does art play in your own life?
  • If you could be any kind of artist, what would you be?  Why?
  • What do your doodles say about your personality?  Check this site or others for reference.
  • Why do you think Adult Coloring Books are so popular right now?  This article has some ideas.
Read everyone else's comments, too, and reply back if you'd like!

Art Walk


In a New Post on your blog, post some writing connected to the art print you chose to study during our discussion in the cafeteria yesterday.  Try for at least 250 words. Include your haiku at the end.

Tell us the story from your own life it made you think of, write a critique or vivid description, write a long poem or several shorter ones inspired by the image...whatever you want to come up with. 

Include an image, too.  If you can't get a photo of the actual print on your post, just choose another one online that has the same feeling or look.

Tuesday, March 1, 2016

First 2 pieces to send to our Chinese Friends...

This assignment will allow us to exchange our creative projects with students in a writing class like ours in China.  You will send your Object-Inspired piece and include with it a Letter of Introduction, a brief self-portrait in words and pictures.  This will provide your Chinese reader with a glimpse of who you are and an understanding of why and how you wrote about the object you did.  Remember, you are giving your Chinese reader a glimpse of yourself as an American high school student, and you are also modeling your writing. 

For the Letter of Introduction:
  • Your letter will include a brief personal introduction and should be around a page of writing single-spaced.  
  • You could begin your letter with "Dear Reader" or simply, "Hello!"
  • You can include information about your family, friends, hobbies, events in your life that shaped who you are, your hopes and dreams, your goals for the future, what a typical day is like for you…whatever makes you who you are.  
  • Write in a way that is comfortable and creative but also keep in mind that you might need to make certain accomodations for your readers to understand.
  • You should also include a picture (or several) to give your reader a glimpse of you and your life.  Add a caption under your pictures, too, please, explaining who/what/where/etc. is pictured.

For the Object-Inspired Piece:

  • Your heading for your significant object piece should include your full name, your email address, the name of our class (KHS Creative Writing), and the date. 
  • Your piece should have a creative title and be double-spaced.
  • Your piece should be polished and proofread for errors.  
  • You should also include an image of your object.
  • Please add a brief Author's Note at the beginning or end of your piece explaining the assignment, the object you chose, where you found it, whether your piece is fiction or not, how you got the idea, etc.  Put the note in italics.

          
Please save your Letter and your Object-Inspired piece in ONE GoogleDoc file and share it with me (hfraser@sps.org) no later than the end of class on Friday, 4 March. 


I will send our work to Kevin on Friday so that he may share it with his students at Qingdao when they begin classes next week while we are on Spring Break.  You will be receiving response letters via email from Kevin's students, who will carefully read, ask questions, make connections, and write about what surprises them and what they’d like to know more about.  They will also use your writing as a model to compose their own pieces and send them back to you.  We’ll see where it goes from there! 


Intro to our Chinese Writing Exchange

Our creative writing class has been invited to exchange writing with a writing class in China at Qingdao University.  It is a great opportunity to expand our audience as writers as well as learn about another culture.

The class we'll be exchanging with is a freshman class taught by an MSU exchange teacher, Kevin James. His mother is a good friend of mine and teaches at Parkview.  Her students will be exchanging writing with Kevin's students, too.  Kevin has written a letter to us (see below) explaining some of the cultural differences as well as some guidelines to follow.  He and his students are grateful for this opportunity, and as he explains in his letter, this is a very challenging exercise for his students. Please read the letter and share any questions or comments you may have either in the comment box here or aloud in class.

The first two writing pieces we are going to send will be 1: a letter introducing yourself, and 2: a polished version of your Object-Inspired piece you created at the beginning of the semester.  Please see the next post for more detailed instructions.  Because your writing will serve as a model for Chinese students to follow, we will want to send our best efforts.  We are also under some time constraints, so meeting deadlines will be imperative on this project.  This should be fun!

Xie xie!


Dear Mrs. Fraser’s class,

I’m writing to thank you in advance for sharing your writing and corresponding with my students at Qingdao University. Every semester these students beg for the chance to encounter more authentic English in the classroom, and by reading your work and sharing our writing with your class via e-mail, my students truly value this project as a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.

Here’s a Cliff's Notes, abridged take on the students’ backgrounds: they are all freshman, twenty-seven girls and three boys, majoring in English, and around half of them openly bemoan the fact that they have to study English. They spent their senior year of high school preparing for and taking a college entrance exam--the dreaded, horrible beast that is the gaokao (gow-cow). This is a nine hour exam taken over the course of two days which determines if they can go to college, where they can go to college, and what they can study in college. Oh, and they only get one shot to take and pass it, and if they don’t like the results, they can retake their senior year. (No thanks!) So based on their results, some of them only had the option to study English at Qingdao University; for those who had other options, their parents likely decided studying English at Qingdao University was best for their son or daughter. Bottom line is these students, like all students in China, don’t have much (if any) say in what they study and where they study it, and now they’re stuck in my English class. I think you’ll find, however, that despite the stressful demands of the education system, they’re hungry for the opportunity to express themselves in a creative way with native English speakers of the same age.

You should know that when they read your work, they’ll pour over each word and really mine the text for meaning. Please be aware of the fact that when they share their writing with you, they’ll be incredibly sensitive to what you think of their English ability. It takes an eternity for them to translate what they want to say, and sometimes those translations are bizarre, sometimes nonsensical, but often times hilarious. Take pronouns, for example. I’ve been referred to as “she” more times than I care to count because in spoken Chinese he, she, and it are all pronounced the same as ta. It’s an understandable goof and one that happens frequently.

Most of the translation issues are related to appropriacy, though. For instance, several of my students say “I like playing balls” instead of “I like playing sports” because it’s a direct translation from Chinese. It sounds ridiculous and it’s hilarious, but we know what they mean. So heads up!

The last tidbit on the exchange project relates to internet accessibility in China. Because of the Great Firewall, the Qingdao students can’t access many websites, including Google, Facebook, Youtube, and other American essentials. We also can’t access your class blog, hence the e-mail component of the exchange. So please be aware of the limitations on our end.

On a similar note, please know that there are limitations related to the content of what my students can publish on the internet, including e-mail content. Should your correspondence take a political or religious course, please redirect it. Topics related to, for example, the political sovereignty of the South China Sea, Taiwan, Tibet, and/or Hong Kong are not appropriate because my students could get into big-time hot water for weighing in.

In closing, I know my students are thrilled to get going with the correspondence and learn about you all through your writing. Sorry for the length. Enjoy the writing. Thanks again for your hard work!

All my best,

Kevin


P.S. They chose their own English names, some of which are silly. Like the issues with Chinglish, please try to look past it. Please e-mail if you have questions: kevinjames@missouristate.edu